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in my head by alexapdos in my head by alexapdos
Been pretty busy this past week so today's pokemonday is just something quick and simple. Random number generator gave me Whismur. I always thought they'd be a bit neurotic due to its Pokedex entry saying how they're really sensitive to noise. I imagine this is how they behave before you run into them in Rusturf Tunnel.

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5/20/2013
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:iconkjesta:
I like the general motion very much, it's cute and the boiling lines are a nice touch.
I would pay closer attention to the volumes, however, the left ear seems to grow and shrink a bit. If you want to aim for more full animation, some more slow-in and slow-out would also be nice, as in, more frames at the beginning of the sideways movement, bigger spacing in the middle and then more frames towards the other side. Adding that would make it a lot more organic. Also, right now of course it simply goes back and forth on the same arc. To take it to the next level you could make it a very subtle figure eight movement to connect the arcs better and make it more natural :)
Overall, though, it's very cute animation and I do like the limited style very much.
(I handed out the stars a bit randomly because I'm not entirely comfortable just rating artwork in numbers... I hope it's okay anyway?)
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:iconkittydoseminecraft:
kittydoseminecraft Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
rp : omg its a whismer...
me: ITS A PLUMBLOOM!
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:iconairtyler:
AirTyler Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll tell you what whismer is the best. The shadows were a nice touch
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:iconteamazure:
TeamAzure Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
OH LOOK ITS A PUMBLOOM!!!!
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:iconalexapdos:
alexapdos Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Professional Filmographer
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TeamAzure Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
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TeamAzure Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
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Connan-Bell Featured By Owner May 20, 2013   Traditional Artist
"I hear EVERYTHING!"
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darlilartist88 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's so cool you should make more back up scenery
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FieryRedDogTeko Featured By Owner May 20, 2013   General Artist
This is how see them too xD
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